Tuesday 14 February 2012

Projects 2º ESO



Ryan's personal comment:

The first title “ Mariam and Robin had escaped from the wedding” --- would be better if it said they have escaped

Mariam says: Robin, wait for me! I had escaped from my father. --- again should be have

Prince John: I had burnt the castle ---- should be I have burned the castle.

Robin Hood gave money from the rich to the poor --- should be: Robin Hood stole from the rich and gave to the poor

Poor man: Wonderfull, I have money. Thanks Robin. --- should be wonderful with one L

Crussade --- should be crusade with one S

King Richard: Here you have the noble tittles ---- should be titles with one T

Personal comment: It was neat how they used they pictures as the background. Good music!