Tuesday, 14 February 2012
Projects 2º ESO
Ryan's personal comment:
The first title “ Mariam and Robin had escaped from the wedding” --- would be better if it said they have escaped
Mariam says: Robin, wait for me! I had escaped from my father. --- again should be have
Prince John: I had burnt the castle ---- should be I have burned the castle.
Robin Hood gave money from the rich to the poor --- should be: Robin Hood stole from the rich and gave to the poor
Poor man: Wonderfull, I have money. Thanks Robin. --- should be wonderful with one L
Crussade --- should be crusade with one S
King Richard: Here you have the noble tittles ---- should be titles with one T
Personal comment: It was neat how they used they pictures as the background. Good music!